Please welcome guest author Rachel Firasek, talking about team building and that dreaded middle child:

Everywhere I turn lately, the new “in-thing” is Team Building. I know, it’s crazy right? I’m so not a team player. I try real hard, but in the end I’ll always be that lone wolf standing slightly apart from the pack. Does this mean that I want to screw the team? Absolutely not. It means that I have to work harder at controlling my urges to stand apart. Hmmm… the more I think about it, standing alone doesn’t seem so bad—if it serves a purpose.

That’s a really big if.

Anyway, back to my point. I’ve been working on two series this year and I’ve learned some valuable lessons on team building through my stories. My most recent series: Curse of the Phoenix is a series dedicated to Egyptian mythology. I love these stories, but… they didn’t always love me.

They weren’t on my team. At least that naughty little book two wasn’t. The Last Awakening was a rude awakening to my ego.  The Last Rising (Book1) soared from my fingertips with very little plot problems and the characters did mostly what I wanted them to. But, not TLA. Nope, book2 was quite the little stinker. It is the series middle and as the middle child, it did what it was supposed to. It tested me. And as any good team leader would do, I whipped its butt and made it get back in line with the rest of the pack.

What was wrong with it?

It didn’t blend. Yes, sometimes when you’re part of a team if you stand out too much, you’re not really being a team player and that is exactly what was wrong with the first draft of that second book. So, it was sliced and diced until it became a story that matched the consistency and flow of the first in the series.

And low and behold, I had a book2  in my series that now felt like it should have been in the series instead of that loner standing on the outside. Book3 is turned into my editor and I totally felt good about that story when it was done. So, this is the first series that I’ve actually finished and turned in. It was a learning lesson in team work and how to make your books/characters/plots work as a team for you.

Have you read a book in a series that just didn’t quite fit in with the team? Written one? Leave me a comment and let me know. I’m all for a good conversation. :-)

Learn more about the Curse of the Phoenix series HERE.

About the Author:

Rachel Firasek grew up in the south and despite the gentle pace, she harassed life at full steam. Her curiosity about mythology, human nature, and the chemical imbalance we call love led her to writing. Her stories began with macabre war poems and shifted to enchanted fairytales, before she settled on a blending of the two.

Today you’ll find her tucked on a small parcel of land, surrounded by bleating sheep and barking dogs, with her husband and children. She entertains them all with her wacky sense of humor or animated reenactments of bad 80’s dance moves.

She’s intrigued by anything unexplained and seeks the answers to this crazy thing we call life. You can find her where the heart twists the soul and lights the shadows… or at www.rachelfirasek.com .

Today’s post is aimed mostly at writers, but I think every person on this planet can benefit from it. I’m talking about why we need to have selective hearing in order to succeed.

The publishing industry is filled with a lot of criticism. It’s there when you are learning craft. It’s there when you’re seeking representation or trying to land a publishing contract. It’s even there when you are a NYT bestselling author. Criticism is something you can never be free of. In many cases it’s a good thing. Aspiring authors need constructive criticism to improve their craft. It’s something they need to listen to if they want to reach their ultimate goal. But it can be so easy to get caught up in the negative aspect of it all. To doubt yourself. To get discouraged. This is why writers need to have ultimate belief in themselves, to know they will meet their goal, no matter how long it takes or how hard it sometimes feels. They need to practice selective hearing.

When you are receiving critiques or reading reviews, take those parts that work for you—that you truly feel will make you a better writer—and dismiss the rest as utter nonsense. Know that you have stories to tell, and trust that there are others in the world who will want to hear them. Because no one else will ever believe in you if you don’t believe in yourself.

 

 

I’ve been thinking a lot about today’s topic: What does it mean to be a successful author?

I think we all tend to measure success in terms of monetary gain. Let’s face it, our society is all about the mulah, so it’s instinctive to use this as the indicator of success. But I honestly believe that for most of us authors, there’s a lot more to it than that. We write to make a connection, to inspire others. To know that we’ve made a difference.

So, even if you haven’t made a lot of money as an author, who’s to say you’re not successful? An email from a fan, a conversation with an excited reader, a glowing review: in many ways those things last longer and mean more than money.

While it’s somewhat necessary to focus on money because, let’s face it, smiles and good will don’t pay the bills or put food on the table, money is not the only thing an author should think about. It’s those connections we make that really make a difference, and that’s what we’ll ultimately remember when we come to the end of the road and reflect back on our lives.

For you writers, I’d like to know, how do you measure success as an author?

Update: The Winner of this Contest is Liia Ann White. Congrats Liia!

Hi everyone. I have a special treat for you this Wednesday: the super-awesome Rachel Firasek! I wanted to ask her a few questions about her recent release, Piper’s Fury. So let’s get started:

ME: Your first novel, Piper’s Fury, released last month and has recently been awarded The Romance Reviews Top Pick and a 5 star rating. (Congrats!!) Tell us a bit about your story.

RACHEL: If you let me go into it, I’ll tell you the whole book. Lol. So, here’s the blurb.

It’s an empath thing…

Using your “powers” to help the Dark Hills Police Department hunt down serial killers doesn’t leave much time for dating. Not that Piper Anast is complaining. The last thing she needs is some guy brushing up against her and pumping his pornographic thoughts into her head.

When she meets Bennett Slade, a sexy, tormented vampire, Piper stumbles headlong into a telepathic connection with his missing daughter. She can’t leave the kid to the evil surrounding her unwanted visions, nor can she resist her draw to Slade. He’s the first guy she’s been able to touch vision-free in, well, forever.

As she and Slade close in on the evil creature holding his daughter, Piper’s powers morph into a deadly fury. To save Slade’s daughter-and herself-Piper must face down demons she never knew she had and trust the one thing she keeps from everyone.

Her heart.

ME: Who is your hero and what is he like?

RACHEL: Bennett Slade is the hero and he’s so hawt! Patient, strong, and he has a wicked sense of humor. He’s the perfect compliment for my hot-head heroine.

ME: Now tell us a little bit about your heroine.

RACHEL: She’s a psychic that can absorb people’s thoughts and memories. Unfortunately, there is a bit of a genetic disorder that also attracts and distorts men’s visions of her. She’s a suburban hermit and guarding her heart takes first priority.

ME: What do you think your readers will like most about your story?

RACHEL: I think they’ll like Piper’s protectiveness and her journey into love. Teaching a recluse to love herself and to trust in her love of others is no easy task, but Slade is willing to wait her out.

ME: Now, you do plan on writing other books in this series, right?

RACHEL: Book 2 in the series is in draft form. The Gypsy Triangle will release this fall, if I can get it straightened out. For those readers that loved Piper’s Fury, you’re going to be shocked and amazed at book 2. And there are fun, new characters to play with.

ME: Do tell, what’s coming up next for you? ;-)

RACHEL: Whew, Rosalie, I’m so super busy these days. I have an erotic ménage short coming out in July with the Whiskey Creek Press, titled Stone Hard Love. Two cops, one prissy bride, and handcuffs to tie her to the two men in her life. It’s much fun.

I also recently signed a three book contract with Entangled Publishing. I’m so excited about this series. The novellas will release September through November and involve the Egyptian Gods, a voodoo priestess, and a sassy American saloon girl. Yep, it’s a crazy group of ladies, but they are oh-so-much fun.

You can connect with Rachel at the following sites:

http://www.rachelfirasek.com

http://www.twitter.com/raebob78

https://www.facebook.com/#!/pages/Rachel-Firasek/175543929127527

Here’s an Excerpt for Piper’s Fury:

“How do you do it?”

“Do what?”

“Feed,” I said.

He grinned. “Your mind amazes me, Piper. It flits from one subject to the next. Do you ever find peace?”

I shrugged. He was avoiding my question with one of his own. “How?”

“If I tell you, do you promise not to run in horror?”

Good question. What if he showed me something repulsive like the fangs of a snake? I’d seen Gage’s fangs, but what if they were little because he was a baby vamp? What if they kept growing? Would I be able to look at him the same again? “Yes. I promise.”

“Give me your wrist.”

I tentatively stretched my arm out, wrist up. He kept hold of my hand and raised it to his face.

I wrenched it back to cradle against my chest, “I didn’t say you could feed on me.”

“Piper, I would not feed from you without your permission. Trust me.”

“No tasting either.”

He shook with suppressed laughter. “I promise.”

I stretched my arm back out to him and once again he raised it to his face. This time, he ran his nose along the vein running up my wrist, tickling me whenever he brushed my skin, but it was a tickle I wanted to continue forever.

“Open your eyes.”

I wasn’t even aware they’d drifted shut. My lids flickered open and my eyes met the blue flame flickering behind his.

“What?”

“Watch.” He opened his mouth. His canine teeth, slightly longer than before, subtly shifted in his gum line.

“Wow. That was cool. Can you make them go up and down?”

He snapped his teeth together. “I am not a freak for your entertainment. I do not ask you to touch everyone who passes to see what kind of life they have lived.”

Obviously, I’d struck a nerve. “I’m sorry. I guess I expected something bigger. Like the fangs of a cobra or something.”

“Well, I am sorry to disappoint you.” He turned his face away from me to hide the pained expression my words had caused. I grasped his strong chin and turned his face back toward mine.

“I’m sorry. It was just a little startling, that’s all. I didn’t mean to poke fun at you.”

He leaned into my hand. His slight stubble scraped along my palm and I found myself exploring the hard angles of his face, firm muscle wrapped over steel. I let my hand slide along his neck to tease the hair curling gently at his collar. His eyes shut, allowing me the freedom to watch the emotions shift across his skin.

Dark and strong. Two simple words to describe the vulnerable strength in this anything-but-simple man. I craved the taste of him again. Leaning forward, I slid my parted lips across his. His intake of breath encouraged me to run the tip of my tongue along the seam of his mouth, teasing for entry. His eyes opened and I pulled back.

“You were kissing me with your eyes open.”

“Yes.”

He touched my cheek. “Why?”

“I wanted to watch your face.”

“Your honesty, Piper, is what I like most about you.” His hands braced my head and he pulled me back down for another kiss. This time, he took control and deepened the assault on my senses. His tongue plunged into my mouth, sliding along mine and withdrawing only to plunge in again, coating my taste buds with his minty flavor. He tilted my head for better access and drove his tongue even deeper. A moan escaped him, sounding almost like a growl.

I broke away. “Am I hurting you?”

“No. Less talk, more kissing.”

“But—”

Talk was overrated, anyway. He leaned deeper into me and explored my mouth the same way you nibble the cherry out of a cordial at Christmas. Delicious. When he moved to tease my jaw with his teeth, I asked, “Slade, will you show me the other way?”

He had worked down to my neck and a ragged breath escaped me when he worked the skin between his teeth. My stomach tightened and a dampness gathered in my panties. “What other way?”

“You said there were two ways to feed.”

His head rose from the crook of my neck and I completely forgot to breath. The heat in his eyes made my anger look like a holiday. Fire surged from his body and ate through my skin. Power. Pure energy. Little sparks darted between us like one of those static balls at the mall.

“You do not realize what you are asking.”

“You won’t hurt me, will you?” In my heart, I knew he wouldn’t. He was too gentle, too careful.

“Never.”

“Well, show me a little of this so-called addictive euphoria.” Curiosity usually never affected me, but with him, I wanted to know everything. Knowledge killed fear. “You give it to strangers—why not me?”

He kissed the pout from my lips and I grinned. Feminine wiles win again.

“Stand up.”

I stood and waited.

“Shut your eyes and turn around.”

“Why?”

“Trust me.”

“Fine.” I snapped my eyes closed and took a leap of faith by turning around. Several seconds passed before the rustling of fabric warned me Slade had removed his shirt. His voice rumbled close to my ear. “Raise your arms.”

My arms went into the air as if his voice be-spelled them somehow. “Why?”

“Would you quit asking that?”

“No.”

His soft chuckle made me grin. He tugged my t-shirt clear of my jeans and I spun around. “Whoa, what are you doing?”

“I want your skin against mine when I do this. It will be much better this way. I promise.”

“Do I look stupid to you?”

“No. You look gorgeous. Now take off your shirt.”

“Why?”

“You are most exasperating. You asked me to do this!”

“Why won’t you tell me what you’re going to do?”

He ran a hand through his dark hair. “Fine. I am removing your shirt because, if we get carried away, I do not want blood on your clothes.”

“Blood? I didn’t say you could feed.”

“Piper, this will be good and when it is, you may ask me to bite you. I will not be able to deny you. If you want to stop, you had better do it now. I will not be able to later. Not with you.”

Rosalie, thank you so much for letting me come and play with your friends today. I hope you all enjoy learning a little more about Piper’s Fury. J

If you’d like to win a free ecopy of Piper’s Fury, please tell me the last vampire book you read and loved. What was it that made it so great?

Rachel’s writing career began at the impressionable age of twelve with a poem dedicated to the soldiers of Desert Storm. A dark macabre affair that earned her a publication in an anthology and many raised eyebrows from family and friends, she hid her poetry and artistic style for years…

Tucked away in the heart of Central Texas, with the loving support of her husband and three children, she dusted the cobwebs from her craft. Returning to those twisted regions of her mind, she creates dark urban fantasies and soul-searching paranormal romance.

To learn where love twists the soul and lights the shadows, visit Rachel at http://www.rachelfirasek.com/

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Image: Michal Marcol / FreeDigitalPhotos.net

Professional jealousy…in a word, it sucks.

It’s so easy to look at someone else’s accomplishment and feel envy. To wonder, why can’t I have what they have? Especially when you’re talking writers and publishing contracts/bestsellers lists. But it’s a dangerous emotion to have. Why?

Well, for one, a lot of these things are out of our control. The market is ever-changing and retail space for books is shrinking. This is bound to create disparity between authors who are already well-established and those who are newer to the industry. Sure, the digital revolution will probably change this up to some degree, but things are still in flux. Who knows how they’ll shake out?

Secondly, we are all different. Our writing, the way we think, our worldbuilding. These are all factors that go into determining our professional successes, along with a healthy dose of luck. And let’s face it, some of us have more of that than others. 

I have more than my fair share of frustrations and jealousy over the success of other authors. Whenever I’m feeling that way, I try to remind myself that they probably had a good amount of failures too. Everyone pays their dues, at one time or another.

(Updated Note: This blog post is my overall reflection on the industry, not a personal indicator of anything going on in my life right now. I have actually have some major things in the works that I can’t wait to SQUEE about! :-) )

Do you ever have moments of frustration, moments of jealousy over others’ professional successes? How do you handle it? Do you ignore it? Get wasted? What? Winking smile

I’m sure some of you looked at the title of this post and laughed. Too much marketing? Not possible, you say. But I dare to posit there is such a thing.

So when do your marketing efforts become too much?

  • When you are losing so much sleep you can’t properly function
  • When you are in danger of losing your day job because your marketing efforts are bleeding over into that time
  • When you don’t have time to write another book

I think part of the danger of marketing is that it feels like you are being proactive in developing your career, so you want to do more and more of it. The problem is that with today’s current methods, it’s not really possible to see which forms of marketing actually work. So authors do it all, hoping that something will stick. But the inability to accurately measure those efforts can lead to major burnout, and that’s dangerous. Possibly career-killing. Just my humble opinion, of course.

I’d love to hear your thoughts on the topic of marketing. Do you believe, as I do, in the possibility of marketing overkill? What types of marketing do you think are most effective, i.e. what draws you in as a reader? A website, reviews, books trailers?

PlacingOut       CrimePunishment

Today I’m delighted to host Pat Brown on the site. We’ll be talking about her latest release:

ME: Your latest novella, Placing Out, is a historical romance featuring a police officer who is firmly in the closet. Can you tell us more about it?

PAT: My interest in historical fiction grew out of my love for Los Angeles. While watching a documentary on the city during Prohibition, I was fascinated to find out that Los Angeles didn’t have the organized gangs like Chicago or New York at that time, instead they had the LAPD, who were very ruthless and efficient in keeping East coast crime bosses out – they wanted the job themselves. Pretty well all police forces were corrupt during Prohibition, but the LAPD didn’t work with the gangs, they were the gangs. Along with City Hall, local businessmen and the L.A. Times, gambling joints, brothels and speakeasies were protected and sometimes even owned by cops.

Once I knew this, I had to write about it. My first historical was actually a novel called Shadows and Smoke, but it hasn’t been published yet. I got an agent for it, so he’s out working to sell it. But while researching the time that led up to Prohibition I stumbled across a program called placing out. It was devised by social agencies to move impoverished and often orphan children to a better life out west. The west needed workers and the children, the logic went, needed homes. Train loads of children, from babies to teenagers were shipped out to territories like Nebraska and Kansas.

I tried to imagine what it must have been like to be a kid taken from his home, no matter how bad it was all he knew, and sent out to live with strangers who might or might not care about him. Some of those children ended up in good, caring homes, but others became little more than indentured servants. I came up with Dylan Daniels, a boy of 10 who had lost his mother and whose father could no longer care for him. He was a thief and pickpocket and was arrested and shipped to Nebraska to stay with a farm family. He grew up there, among a stern, unloving family until he ran away. He realized he preferred the company of men to women and knew he couldn’t stay in Nebraska. He fled to Hollywood where he became a high-priced rent boy who catered to rich and famous men. Until he meets Ben Carter, an LAPD officer who arrests Dylan in a pansy bar raid. From the very beginning, Ben, a cop buried deep in the closet, finds himself hopelessly attracted to Dylan. Their struggle is to find a way to make what they have work against self-hatred and society’s pressure to be ‘normal’.

ME: You write M/M romance. What inspired you to pen stories in this genre?

PAT: I wrote those characters because that’s what they were. My characters grow in me and they tell me who and what they are. I originally meant Shadows and Smoke to have a gay protag but when I started writing, the character basically said in no uncertain terms that he liked women, so he became straight.

ME: What do you think your readers will like most about your story?

PAT: I think Placing Out shows a side of Hollywood/Los Angeles few people know. It’s not the Hollywood of movie stars, or rich, glitzy people. It’s about an LAPD cop who does things he’s not proud of and how he comes to accept it and even embrace it.

ME: What types of stories do you like to read and who is your favorite author?

PAT: I love reading darker crime fiction. I love Michael Connelly, Robert Crais and T. Jefferson Parker to name a couple. Lately almost all of my reading has been non-fiction history books. Prohibition, Los Angeles and most recently, New York City in the 1800s.

ME: What’s next for you? Do you plan on writing any other historicals?

PAT: I have the one historical novel finished. I’m currently working on another one, this one set in New York City in 1880s. It deals with 2 Irish immigrants who have to find their place in the new world and a smart-assed, 10 year old thief who wants to be somebody.

You can find Pat on the following Social Media Sites:

http://pabrown.com

http://twitter.com/pabrown

https://www.facebook.com/PatABrown

Blurb: Placing Out is an historical romance set in 1932 Los Angeles. Ben Carter is a 6 year veteran of the LAPD, deeply in the closet. Dylan Daniels was a placed out kid sent from New York’s Five Points at 10 to a family in Nebraska until he ran away at 18 when he realized he preferred boys and didn’t want to be a farmer. In Hollywood he ends up as a popular hustler with a number of wealthy clients. In a bar raid he meets Ben who is instantly attracted and repelled by this beautiful man. Between them they struggle to overcome the barriers that keep them apart, including Ben being in a brutal squad that frequently raids pansy bars and beats the patrons. This tears Ben apart. Will he let Dylan’s love heal him or destroy him altogether?

Excerpt:

The New York Times headline is based on a real headline I found in the archives of the Times. The actual date was in the 30s. But much of the wording is the same.

NEW YORK TIMES

Thursday, May 15, 1919

A HEARTLESS FATHER

Two children named Daniels, aged respectively two and eight years, last night sought shelter in the 6th precinct station house and told the Sergeant in charge that their father turned them into the street, and told them to help themselves. The children will be sent to the Almshouse.

Five Points, New York, 1919

I always remember the train. A black dragon, it smoked and roared, throwing up sparks that burned my face and left spots on my brand new shirt. The one the lady from the Five Points Mission got us so we’d be ready for our placing out. She told Da we had to look good for our new family. Every time I hear a train whistle now, I think back on that day. And all the days that followed on my trip west and the new life I had there.

Don’t remember Ma and Da much. Ma wasn’t there at all in the end and Da was gone most of the time working, out looking for work or in jail when he got pinched working for the Five Pointers or the Gophers. I barely remember Ma at all. She died in that big fire at her job in the garment factory when the owners locked all the doors and no one could get out. Da was never the same after. Only a year later, the fever took Flora and Mary, our little sisters. They were both sweet girls. That only left me and Sean who was only two. Moira, the oldest, was always a bitch. Even Ma said so, calling her a witch and born slattern.

Didn’t matter, after Ma died, Da said it was up to Moira to take care of us. She got out of that when she run off with Jimmy Paglia, that no good Eye-tal-yan Wop. She married him. Da nearly had a fit when she did that. But it was worse when she told us she wasn’t gonna mind me no more. She called me a no good street rat who should have been drowned at birth. I slugged her and ran away. No one caught me. No one ever could when I didn’t wanna be caught. They call me Jack because I was as fast as a jackrabbit.

I ran with Ding Dong for a while, helping him and other Dusters with their hustles. Until the coppers got me cornered behind Old Bailey’s saloon. I’d run off with a bottle of gin. Stuff tastes like piss, but I can sell it for two bits and ain’t that sweet. Except this time the coppers caught me and tossed me in the hoosegow. I figure Da would come around and get me out. He did, then he turns around and put us out, sayin’ we were too much trouble.

Sean was the one took us to that police station. They sent us away too. I was still expecting Da to come get us, instead this wrinkled old dame showed up carrying a Bible. Tells me she’s from something called the Five Points House of Industry. Her skirts were all black and crinkly and rustled whenever she moved. I don’t remember Ma wearing anything so fancy. This lady said her name was Rose Marie and she was a woman of God, doing God’s work. When I ask her what that is, she say it’s saving lost and fallen souls like me.

“I ain’t lost,” I told her. “And I ain’t fallen nowhere. I’m standing right here.”

“You are indeed, young man. You’re a poor orphan boy who has taken to the dirty streets to survive. You have fallen into that vast and stinking den of iniquity. Arrested stealing a bottle of the devil’s drink.”

“Ain’t no orphan neither.”

“Your ma died. You live in squalor among the most base humans. You’re father can’t take care of you. He told me as much.” She patted the folds of her big dress and touched my head. I jerked away from her, wanting to tell her not to touch me. Instead I batted her hand away when she tried to touch me again. “We’re going to take care of you, Dylan Daniels. You and your brother. We’re going to take you to a place where you can learn to be a man.”

“A man?” I snorted. “I’m ten years old. I ain’t no man.”

“Nonetheless.” She was all stuffy and stiff. I didn’t like her. She didn’t care. “You are going to be placed out.”

“I don’t know what you’re talking about, lady. I ain’t going nowhere.”

She looked around the filthy cell they had put me in. It smelled like piss and shit. There was a sparkle in her brown eyes when she looked back at me. “No, young man, you aren’t. For now.”

I still didn’t know what she was talking about it. I didn’t know until Da came with a bag I recognized as belonging to Ma, all tied up with twine. He also handed me a silver dollar.

“You be a good, boy. Make your mother proud.”

I stared down at the bag and the dollar glittering in the palm of my hand. I’d never had that much money in all my life. I still didn’t get it.

“They haven’t told me where you’re going to, but Missus Matthews says they’re all good homes. You’re getting a real chance if you behave and mind your betters.”

It hit me like I got kicked by one of Tony Gambol’s big bay Clydesdales. Da was sending both of us away. “I won’t go,” I said, folding my arms over my chest. “You can’t fuckin’ make me.”

He slapped me across the face. I didn’t see it coming and fell back, landing on my ass on the dirty, rough floor. I threw myself to my feet but he backed away, going to the jail cell door.

“I don’t like doin’ that, Jack-boy, but you ain’t got no choice in this. I can’t be your ma and pa both. With your ma gone, I gotta do what’s good for both of you.”

I argued and yelled but no one listened. Da left and I was alone. I stayed alone until the Five Points lady came for me and took me and my bag and silver dollar, now carefully hidden in my shoe, to the train station. Sean was there with Da. He clung to Da ’til he shoved Sean at me. Then he hung on to me so tight my hand fell asleep. He was already wailing when I dragged him into the belching monster. It shuddered and grunted as it pulled away from the station. I looked at the platform through a grimy, soot-covered window but Da was already gone.

I got so I could sleep in the dragon’s belly. I met other kids like me. Over a hundred of us. Some were real orphans, some were like me, picked up by the cops, others volunteered to be placed out. They fed us, mustard sandwiches and sometimes jam. In Omaha they divided our four cars up into cities. Our car was going to Nebraska. Someplace near North Platte. The resident agent, William T. Elder, took us out in a horse drawn wagon to introduce us to our new family, the Chatterfields.

As we drove away from the still belching train, I watched until we turned a corner and headed on a dusty road out of town and I couldn’t see the train no more. Then I turned in my seat and stared straight ahead, knowing I ain’t never gonna see Da or Moira agin. Sean kept at me about when Da comin’ to get us ’til I slapped him.

Folks ask me later if I cried. ‘Course not. I don’t cry. What do they think I am? A baby? Sean was the baby, not me.

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http://pabrown.com/place.htm

So Pat wants to know, what is it you like about historical fiction. What would you like to see that hasn’t been done yet?

Something really cool happened to me yesterday. Someone who had critiqued the first two chapters of For Love of an Angel (randomly via Critique Circle) contacted me to tell me she couldn’t stop thinking about my story or my characters. Yippee! That’s what every author wants to hear, isn’t it?  But that got me thinking about critique groups and/or partners, and what benefits they should be providing.

Everyone differs when it comes to their critiquing style. Some people prefer to work with one or a few critique partners, others like to be a part of a bigger group. Here’s what I found works for me:

I have a critique partner, another author who I met at RWA National last year. She gets to see my really shitty initial drafts, the ones riddled with adjectives and adverbs (poor her, LOL). After I get comments back from her I’ll do one or two more rounds of edits before submitting the first few chapters to www.critiquecircle.com. This is a site where you can submit your work to be critiqued. It sits in a pool and whoever’s interested in the story will pick it up and critique it. The great thing about this kind of critiquing is that you get comments from multiple people (usually 3-10 or more) who don’t know you and therefore aren’t worried about hurting your feelings. The downside is they aren’t worried about hurting your feelings. Smile

I’ve found Critique Circle to be a great tool for testing reader reaction. Some people will love my work, others won’t, but I know if I’m hearing the same comment by two or more people, then that’s a suggestion I should consider taking.

So what have I learned from this type of critiquing? Well, I’ve learned what I need in both critique partners and groups.

With a critique partner, I need someone who can provide encouragement while pointing out the flaws in my manuscript. This person sees the work in its infancy stage, when I’m still very attached to it. There are those who say crit partners should be completely honest, even if the work sucks. That’s a valid point, but that’s not the kind of critique partner I want. In an industry riddled with rejection and negativity, I need to have someone on my team, someone who is encouraging me to go for it. She should help make my work stronger, not be judge and jury regarding the sales potential of my manuscript.

With a critique group, I need people who can provide quick, honest feedback on what works and what doesn’t. Getting these multiple reviews helps me decide how I want to proceed with revisions. 

So tell me what works for you? Critique partners? A critique group? Or do you prefer to go it alone?

Happy Monday everyone! Guess what I did last week? This:

Haunted_Mansion

Anyone recognize it?

It’s the Haunted Mansion at Disney World! I thought it might be a little much for the 2 year old, but he loved it. And let me tell you, speeding past those darkened corridors, gazing upon the ghostly inhabitants, was major fuel for the imagination. I’m feeling a Gothic novel coming on. Smile

The Disney World trip was preceded by this:

55548_hig-harry-potter-0620                      Harry Potter World

Look familiar? It’s the Wizarding World of Harry Potter, and man was it something to see (super crowded though). Walking down the narrow streets, passing Ollivanders and Dervish and Banges, and touring Hogwarts, I could practically imagine I was in Harry’s world.

After taking in all these amazing reminders of just how great the human imagination can be, I’m ready to get back to writing!

So tell me, what fuels your imagination? Movies? Music? Visits to foreign places?

I’ve been in the planning process for a series and it’s brought to mind the subject of names. Names are something we tend not to think too much about (at least I don’t), but yet they are so important because they can help shape the character.

When I first start planning a new story, I come up with a very general plot and a couple of adverbs to describe my characters. Then I’ll use the setting and character features to come up with an appropriate name. For example, in my Fallen Warriors series, I used biblical names to describe all of my fallen angels. Even though my angels aren’t biblical (they’re actually a race of beings existing in an alternate reality), it seemed fitting to give them these names.

What I’ve found to be really interesting is that once I choose a name it helps me to shape the character’s personality even further. When I chose the name Eva for the heroine in one of my stories, I knew she would be strong but flexible, open to change. A heroine in another story is named Tayla, and she’s tougher, more stubborn. So in a round about way, my character names I’ve chosen have actually helped me to strengthen my character’s personalities and firm down my plot.

For you writers, how do you choose your character names? Do you find that you attribute personality traits to your characters based on their names (or conversely, name them based on character traits you’ve given them)?

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